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Chapter 29 Angry Wen Leyu

Li Ye knew that the little spy at his deskmate was peeking at his writing, but he had no intention of stopping it.

After all, he still needs to write this novel for a long time, and he can't hide it no matter how close Wen Leyu is.

Besides, why should I hide this little girl who is twelve years satisfied with?

Not only did it be too distracting, but it was also wasting energy.

If you have the energy, it is better to eliminate the differences in the era of "Luxing" cleaner and more meticulously, so as not to cause unnecessary trouble.

Now there is 81 years without the Internet. Many common historical knowledge in later generations should not appear in a 19-year-old boy in a small northern town.

For example, the identity of Yu Zecheng, an important character in the novel.

Yu Zecheng was born in the Qingpu Special Training Class in the 26th year of the Republic of China. Later, he joined the Chongqing Military Control Commission's Instigation Section, and later transferred to the Director of the Confidential Department of the Tianjin City Secret Service.

Just the names of these three units are not the knowledge points that ordinary people in the 1980s should have known.

If Li Ye copied all the details in the TV series "Luxing" completely, it would definitely arouse the reader's desire to read, but it would also arouse many people's suspicion.

How do you know so clearly?

You said you have a grandfather who fought against the war? Your grandfather is a big and rude man with open eyes, but he still knows this?

Therefore, Li Ye must vaguely deal with this kind of knowledge point, and it cannot affect the readers' reading experience, which is still challenging.

【Bang~】

[The gunshot aroused Yu Zecheng's vigilance. At this time, Zhang Mingyi, the telecommunication listener who was responsible for taking over him, appeared and was shot behind Zhang Mingyi]

Li Ye has already written the first chapter of Gao Chao plot. When he was writing quickly, his elbow was gently touched by his deskmate Wen Leyu.

When a writer describes the plot and thinking coherently, he hates being disturbed, but who is the little mute? You can’t be angry!

Li Ye turned his head and looked at Wen Leyu, and found that there was a serious look in her talking eyes.

The note was pushed over, and it read: "Is this Yu Zecheng the protagonist of the novel? If so, do you know it will cause you a big trouble?"

The little girl is quite enlightened.

Li Ye was very happy. A girl sincerely considered you. This kind of thought alone is rare.

Of course, Li Ye's awareness in this regard is higher than Wen Leyu.

He was a person who had seen the great master of river crabs in later generations. Not to mention this kind of position, even some of the descriptions in the novel, Li Ye would also carefully distinguish them.

For example, Director Dai, who appeared in the first episode of the TV series, has a very strong aura portrayal. After all, he is a big shot! He must have the aura of a turtle.

But now if Li Ye describes his personal aura in his novel, then this novel will not be discussed before, and the trouble may not be small.

When Zuo Lan appears, he must make a lot of pen and ink to fully highlight the vitality and positiveness of the youth of the new era.

This is in line with the values ​​of the times, and it is also business writing! It is not easy or in a mess to make money.

Seeing a look of worry in Wen Leyu's eyes, Li Ye wrote on the paper: "No, justice will definitely defeat evil."

Wen Leyu looked at Li Ye's words and frowned slightly at him. After a few seconds, she suddenly wrote on the paper: "This Yu Zecheng is underground D, right?"

Little sister, are you trying to let me spoil it?

Li Ye wrote on paper: "The level of reading experience of a novel depends on whether the uncertainty of the plot is strong enough, so I can't tell you the answer."

Wen Leyu blinked his eyes, pouted his lips, turned his head and stopped looking at Li Ye. His little butt slipped to the other end of the bench and distanced himself from Li Ye.

She was angry, obviously angry.

The angry little beauty is so interesting. Li Ye sighed inwardly: "It's because I don't have enough concentration, but the beauty is too seductive."

Li Ye did not deliberately coax Wen Leyu. He thought that a good girl would self-regulate bad emotions.

Sure enough, after Li Ye turned around and wrote for a while, the angry Wen Leyu secretly "slid" back from the other end of the stool.

But she did not stretch her neck to continue to peek at Li Ye's novels, and she was squeamishly retaining her own little temper and dignity.

Li Ye picked up the few pages of letter paper he wrote, pushed it in front of her, and said, "Help help, you can help our school proofreading manuscript, and then copy one, which you need to use when submitting it."

Wen Leyu was a little caught off guard, but he quickly took it over. The smile on the corner of his mouth showed her inner happiness at this moment.

Li Ye didn't tell him the "answer". She thought Li Ye didn't believe her friend, but now Li Ye asked her to proofread the draft. Wasn't she thinking about it just now?

Proofreading is to find out the typos and inappropriate words in the article, which is quite a test of Chinese skills.

Wen Leyu's Chinese is actually stronger than Li Ye. Li Ye is strong in exam-taking ability, and Wen Leyu's scope of exploration and text accumulation really surprised Li Ye.

It seems that over the years, not only Teacher Ke has been trying hard to educate Wen Leyu, but the little girl is also a good kid who is easy to learn.

But what Li Ye didn't know was that Wen Leyu, the primary school tycoon, soon admired Li Ye and was impressed.

After she took Li Ye's first draft and letter paper, she began to carefully proofread the draft and copy it, but before she could copy a page, she forgot her serious work and was deeply involved in the plot of the novel.

[Zhang Mingyi fell to the ground, the gunshot wounds and blood stains behind him were shocking, but Yu Zecheng did not look at him again, but quickly retreated to the dead corner on the right side of the door, pulled out the gun, aiming forward with the curling arm flat end

This gun-holding posture can flexibly change the shooting angle, and it is not easy to be attacked by people]

Wen Leyu had never seen such a novel description technique. She just read the words on paper and imagined a vigilant dog spy in her mind. When facing a sudden danger, she made sharp gun tactical actions.

In 1981, there were already martial arts novels pirated from Hong Kong Island on the market.

But whether it is a master like Jin Guliang or more ordinary novel authors, their writing techniques are very different from those of high-quality online articles forty years later.

Jin Guliang's literary skills are not clear, and their classic masterpieces can make readers feel endlessly.

High-quality online articles may not have such profound background, but their advantages lies in the novel plot and the imagination.

High-quality online literature may be looked down upon by authentic martial arts, but if authentic martial arts are placed on online literature websites, they will be unacceptable. (The martial arts channel at a certain point is really cold.)

Wen Leyu read quickly and quickly finished reading three pages of letter paper. Then she returned and read it from the beginning.

After reading it again, she habitually touched Li Ye with her elbow and asked excitedly: "Li Ye, have you ever shot a pistol? Why are you so skillful in writing?"

Well, I am very skilled. If the teacher I like has released a new episode, he must be skilled at playing once.

"Ahem, my grandfather has killed dozens of enemies, so I heard him talk about it when I was a child."

Li Ye quickly spoke up to hide his words, and took a deep breath, silently chanting "color is emptiness is color", and he completely restored his calmness.

This body is so kind and loyal. Xiaochu G is a piece, and it doesn't matter if you think about it.

Wen Leyu is also a pure girl. She didn't notice Li Ye's abnormal reaction at all. She got closer again and asked Li Ye: "Is there any such plot in the future?"

Li Ye said: "Not necessarily, but there must be similar plots."

Since Li Ye wrote this novel, since some sensitive information background has been weakened, he must compensate in other aspects.

So he decided to highlight the tactics and reasoning in the field of special operations. Later generations of spy war novels emerged one after another, and many common sense reasoning knowledge in it was absolutely amazing in this era.

For example, in the article of Brother Ivy, the spy war article, there was a plot of catching Japanese spies.

Ning Yanwang had confirmed that the other party was a woman and found out that the other party had made a public phone call in the grocery store.

However, the grocery store owner cannot describe the woman's appearance characteristics.

However, King Ning Yan took advantage of the women's comparison psychology and asked the owner of the grocery store.

When a woman looks at a woman, the angle is different from that of a man. When a man looks at XXX, the woman looks at external characteristics such as clothes, hairstyles, perfumes, shoes, etc.

Sure enough, the boss's wife made accurate descriptions of the woman's clothes, cosmetics, and hairstyle, and also pointed out that the fabric of the woman's flag was very expensive and so on.

So Ning Yanwang deduced the accurate characteristics of the target and found the hidden spy among the VIP customers in high-end clothing stores.

This kind of reasoning plot can evoke a lot of cheers among readers forty years later, let alone 1981?

Look at the spy war movies these days, the radio station hidden in the popsicle box can cause exclamations. Then it would be strange if the detailed reasoning of later generations, burying pits and filling out the pits, and breaking out of context, and not fascinating readers.

Wen Leyu was fascinated by Li Ye, and she unknowingly posted to Li Ye.

Seeing Li Ye writing the novel word by word, the anxious little girl wanted to open his mind and feel satisfied after seeing the follow-up plot.

But when Li Ye looked over and asked her, Wen Leyu woke up that his work had not been finished.

"You've finished copying? Show it to me!"

"What? I will copy it right away."

Thank you for the rewards from book friends in 20170806222249766, for the rewards from book friends in "color blindness to run red lights", thank you for the rewards from book friends in "Pin Ferry Crossing", and thank you for your brothers!
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